Good night thoughts.no twists or turns,just simple words...?

with grace


upon the pillow


my head


i settle.


icy thoughts


of a chilled day


melt,


away.





my time,


my space








somberly doze


into,,,vivid ?


imaginations,,


dreams.





touch me not


once again.


my space,


,,my time.





just another day


huh kitty?





nice kitty kitty,


cool cat,,,,,,,,,,,





good night.





D.

Good night thoughts.no twists or turns,just simple words...?
I like your poem in the way of its informal style and simplicity. Nice.
Reply:interesting punctuation.
Reply:very pretty, very calming. thank you.
Reply:nice..............I liked it. You should do this more often
Reply:weird
Reply:Very stylized and yet very tranquil. Makes me miss my old kitty, Hope. I love this one. Your use of words is unique and intriguing.
Reply:Good night to you too. I love sleeping and dreaming. 1/3 of my life is spent doing that and sometimes I think it beats being awake. That's why I liked your poem.
Reply:Cool! G'night!

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