As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams;
you sputter
In your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snow's soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
Memories' butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced lashes --
--written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in our long forgotten
secret scripts
And i wishfully think
Is the rhythm
in honey dew drips
upon window sill;
simply the tunes
of my love for you?
Umpteenth edit--HONEST rating please?
Very good.
However, I'd change "lashes" to "fingers." "Lashes" can bring to mind getting beaten with a whip, which does not flow well with the rest of the poem.
Saturday, May 15, 2010
Do u like this?
As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams
you sputter
and in your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snows soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
At the golden break of day,
memories' butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced lashes.--
--written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in long forgotten secret scripts
Do u like this?
Sure
Reply:yes
its good :D
x x x
Reply:kind of
not really my type of poem though
do you like it???
that waters the pond of dreams
you sputter
and in your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snows soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
At the golden break of day,
memories' butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced lashes.--
--written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in long forgotten secret scripts
Do u like this?
Sure
Reply:yes
its good :D
x x x
Reply:kind of
not really my type of poem though
do you like it???
Girls keep flirting with me?
help! I'm a girl and straighter than a ruler, seriously. I'm a bit homophobic to lesbians. Sorry. Girls keep flirting like hugging me excessively, talking to me like an inch away from my face, telling me I'm "soo pretty" frequently, touching me (not like that) like on my shoulder, my hair, my cheeks, and a lot more weird stuff. I REALLY don't like it, and I want to know why me?
Girls keep flirting with me?
well they probably think your cute. they also might like and tell them to back off
Reply:tell em, to back of B****
Reply:cuz ur hot!! lucky :)
fruit baskets
Girls keep flirting with me?
well they probably think your cute. they also might like and tell them to back off
Reply:tell em, to back of B****
Reply:cuz ur hot!! lucky :)
fruit baskets
Wtf is with teenage boys teasing teenage girls?
These 2 guys sit behind me during one of my classes, and the past day or so they've taken to flicking paper at me, and touching me (not in a sexual way or anything) me and whispering god knows what kind of things about me and laughing. I don't really understand why, I've known both of these guys since junior high, one of them is dating one of my close friends. They're both 18 for godsake.... my friends bf apologized after and said he loved me, which is what he always says when I get mad at him because he's kind of a tool that way. But honestly why do you think they're doing what they're doing, and how can i stop them? I'm blonde and tiny they don't me seriously, so i need help!!
Wtf is with teenage boys teasing teenage girls?
thats a guys way of flirting.
Reply:um alot of guys are immature like that. you can move your seat and not sit near them in class anymore. Or you can just talk to ur friends bf and tell him please stop annoying me or else. lol
Reply:They like to joke around and flirt
Wtf is with teenage boys teasing teenage girls?
thats a guys way of flirting.
Reply:um alot of guys are immature like that. you can move your seat and not sit near them in class anymore. Or you can just talk to ur friends bf and tell him please stop annoying me or else. lol
Reply:They like to joke around and flirt
Do you ever get that feeling?
whenever a boy touches me, not just sexually, but even just on the hips i get butterflies in my stomach. is this normal? does it have a name? i can't ever describe the feeling.
Do you ever get that feeling?
thats the feeling of a crush
Reply:Of course it's normal. I'm not sure what it's called and I can't describe it either, it's just something thats there. I love it when the guy I like touches me and brushes up against me. It's amazing!
But yeah, of course it's normal. :)
Reply:It's normal. You're at a point of discovery. You're body's discovering different urges.
Reply:it is normal if you like the guy...a lot lol
im not sure if theres a name for it though, besided liking or loving or however strongly you feel
Reply:Totally! I don't think it has a name other than butterflies though. The hips are a very feminine part of a woman, and when a boy touches them, it sparks a little bit of sexual attraction (even if you're just friends). That doesn't mean it has to lead anywhere though. But its totally normal for you to get butterflies when a boy touches you.
Reply:being horny???
Reply:i dont know if theres a name for it but dont you just love that feeling?
Do you ever get that feeling?
thats the feeling of a crush
Reply:Of course it's normal. I'm not sure what it's called and I can't describe it either, it's just something thats there. I love it when the guy I like touches me and brushes up against me. It's amazing!
But yeah, of course it's normal. :)
Reply:It's normal. You're at a point of discovery. You're body's discovering different urges.
Reply:it is normal if you like the guy...a lot lol
im not sure if theres a name for it though, besided liking or loving or however strongly you feel
Reply:Totally! I don't think it has a name other than butterflies though. The hips are a very feminine part of a woman, and when a boy touches them, it sparks a little bit of sexual attraction (even if you're just friends). That doesn't mean it has to lead anywhere though. But its totally normal for you to get butterflies when a boy touches you.
Reply:being horny???
Reply:i dont know if theres a name for it but dont you just love that feeling?
I don't know if he likes me!!!?
Theres this kid at my school. He is my neighbor and we always hang out outside of school. But he acts completely different inside of school. I mean he flirts with me inside and outside of school but, in school he is always touching me (not innapropriatley) but he always hugs me too. Its very confusing. But I think that he might be just kidding cuz hes one of those ultrapopular kids... you know the type!
I don't know if he likes me!!!?
If you guys are freinds, this is normal, typical guy friend behavior. I'm a sociology major, and I love to read books about body language and such in my spare time. My guy friends always touched, tickled and picked me up all the time. He may be slightly competitive with other guys, sort of claiming his territory when he's with you at school. This may be done subconciously, not really realizing he's doing it that much. He may not like you.
Then again... possibly he does. Do you flirt back a little? Cause maybe if he does like you, he needs a little encourgement from you before doing anything about it.
Reply:He may like you but doesnt know how to tell you straight out that he likes you, Just because he is an ultra popular kid doesnt mean he knows how to express his feelings.why dont you just ask him.
Reply:Guys love to flirt!
And somtimes girls just have to join in before they can totally tell if he likes them or not. Try flirting back, if it gets move personal, you'll be able to tell.
Reply:He's trying to show off in front of people in school, that he got all the girls. If he was interested, I wouldn't be in him if i were you, he's too superficial.
I don't know if he likes me!!!?
If you guys are freinds, this is normal, typical guy friend behavior. I'm a sociology major, and I love to read books about body language and such in my spare time. My guy friends always touched, tickled and picked me up all the time. He may be slightly competitive with other guys, sort of claiming his territory when he's with you at school. This may be done subconciously, not really realizing he's doing it that much. He may not like you.
Then again... possibly he does. Do you flirt back a little? Cause maybe if he does like you, he needs a little encourgement from you before doing anything about it.
Reply:He may like you but doesnt know how to tell you straight out that he likes you, Just because he is an ultra popular kid doesnt mean he knows how to express his feelings.why dont you just ask him.
Reply:Guys love to flirt!
And somtimes girls just have to join in before they can totally tell if he likes them or not. Try flirting back, if it gets move personal, you'll be able to tell.
Reply:He's trying to show off in front of people in school, that he got all the girls. If he was interested, I wouldn't be in him if i were you, he's too superficial.
Where is this sport going to...!?
Divers started complaining on how they dont get penaltys for they're dives...oh God...
http://www.goal.com/en/Articolo.aspx?Con...
Does he even realize what is he talking about???
"In my opinion, it's a penalty. The goalkeeper touched me" - NOT EVERY CONTACT IS A FOUL!!!
"If you see the replay, I jumped, he touched me and in my opinion, it's a penalty." So he wants to say that he dived or what??? hahaha he is ridicilous...
Where is this sport going to...!?
omg!!!!!!!!! what a freakin TARD!!!! the goalie broke my nail! ohh! get over it, crynaldo! you dive every time someone pokes you! not every contact is a foul!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@bend it like an idiot: okay i was going to respect your opinion until u said "dives a little bit" and "equal to kaka". you are joking right? kaka' is a million times better than crynaldo. (who dives A LOT, not just A LITTLE BIT. you were joking with that bit, were you not?)
Reply:Yeah it's a dive. He jumps (dives) over the keeper to avoid being taken out and gets clipped anyway. Watch the clip. Why would he dive anyway? He could of easily rounded the keeper. GK played the man and not the ball and that is why it is a clear pk.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=wlezN2h7xF4
I disagree with what you said to "Galaxyfan" The cleaner and more fair the game is the better. I'm sorry some peoples lives are so boring they have to hang out by the water cooler and debate on whether or not the ref was right to make the call. If they had someone up above watching the replays reporting back to the ref by earpiece it would be nice. Ronaldo does dive a lot but in this case it was clearly a penalty.
Reply:You know... I really love pillows lol
Reply:keyword: "I Jumped"
that gets translated to I Dived
hey look at this dive, start watching it at 3 minutes and 20 seconds
http://youtube.com/watch?v=xZFIRZuHYAA
ironically i support that team but i still know its a dive lol
Reply:Thank you Mister Babyboy for that wonderful video. I couldn't agree more
Reply:Awww,little baby boy still can't get over his issues with Ronaldo...how cute is that,gu gu lol
PS.Yeah,I also agree it should have been penalty;)
Reply:Im sorry, I couldnt see the match so I cant give u my opinion although Id love to shut manchester haters' mouths up hehehe but I love how "divers started complaining" sounds lmao!
@ hehe i love when he dives :D
Reply:trust me i have no idea!
crynaldo is a lozer as we all know it and he will do anything to get his way... i mean seriously... hte GK touched him... what shuld they burn the gk???
i mean c'mon seriously...he's acting like he's the untouchable or sumfyn...he was a diver and he still hasnt finsihed his *ways*
i hate to think what will happen to football if things keeeep goin lyke this!
Reply:the technology out there with special cameras, play should be stopped for about a minute and the call reviewed. eventually, divers will be discouraged.
cricket which is far less popular than football can do it. im certain football can. i don't know what's stopping them.
in this day and age, questionable offsides, goals, penalties should be reviewed.
c ronaldo may dive a little bit but he is better than ibrahimovic andequal to kaka.
oops, i said something wrong?
what blasphemy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahah.
Reply:Ronaldo didn't dive.He jumped to avoid the GK and caught his feet on the goalkeeper's hands.I'll admit that he could have(and should have) stayed up,but that doesn't change the fact that he was tripped.
You say that every contact isn't a foul.The what do you have to say about Steven Gerrard's countless "dives"(by your definition)?Is it Ok for him to dive because you have a soft spot for his club?Its PATHETIC the way people are always waiting for a chance to pick on Ronaldo.
I hate to see diving from any team(including my team).I also hate hypocrites who criticize others while turning a blind eye to cheaters from their own teams.
ginkgo
http://www.goal.com/en/Articolo.aspx?Con...
Does he even realize what is he talking about???
"In my opinion, it's a penalty. The goalkeeper touched me" - NOT EVERY CONTACT IS A FOUL!!!
"If you see the replay, I jumped, he touched me and in my opinion, it's a penalty." So he wants to say that he dived or what??? hahaha he is ridicilous...
Where is this sport going to...!?
omg!!!!!!!!! what a freakin TARD!!!! the goalie broke my nail! ohh! get over it, crynaldo! you dive every time someone pokes you! not every contact is a foul!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@bend it like an idiot: okay i was going to respect your opinion until u said "dives a little bit" and "equal to kaka". you are joking right? kaka' is a million times better than crynaldo. (who dives A LOT, not just A LITTLE BIT. you were joking with that bit, were you not?)
Reply:Yeah it's a dive. He jumps (dives) over the keeper to avoid being taken out and gets clipped anyway. Watch the clip. Why would he dive anyway? He could of easily rounded the keeper. GK played the man and not the ball and that is why it is a clear pk.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=wlezN2h7xF4
I disagree with what you said to "Galaxyfan" The cleaner and more fair the game is the better. I'm sorry some peoples lives are so boring they have to hang out by the water cooler and debate on whether or not the ref was right to make the call. If they had someone up above watching the replays reporting back to the ref by earpiece it would be nice. Ronaldo does dive a lot but in this case it was clearly a penalty.
Reply:You know... I really love pillows lol
Reply:keyword: "I Jumped"
that gets translated to I Dived
hey look at this dive, start watching it at 3 minutes and 20 seconds
http://youtube.com/watch?v=xZFIRZuHYAA
ironically i support that team but i still know its a dive lol
Reply:Thank you Mister Babyboy for that wonderful video. I couldn't agree more
Reply:Awww,little baby boy still can't get over his issues with Ronaldo...how cute is that,gu gu lol
PS.Yeah,I also agree it should have been penalty;)
Reply:Im sorry, I couldnt see the match so I cant give u my opinion although Id love to shut manchester haters' mouths up hehehe but I love how "divers started complaining" sounds lmao!
@ hehe i love when he dives :D
Reply:trust me i have no idea!
crynaldo is a lozer as we all know it and he will do anything to get his way... i mean seriously... hte GK touched him... what shuld they burn the gk???
i mean c'mon seriously...he's acting like he's the untouchable or sumfyn...he was a diver and he still hasnt finsihed his *ways*
i hate to think what will happen to football if things keeeep goin lyke this!
Reply:the technology out there with special cameras, play should be stopped for about a minute and the call reviewed. eventually, divers will be discouraged.
cricket which is far less popular than football can do it. im certain football can. i don't know what's stopping them.
in this day and age, questionable offsides, goals, penalties should be reviewed.
c ronaldo may dive a little bit but he is better than ibrahimovic andequal to kaka.
oops, i said something wrong?
what blasphemy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahah.
Reply:Ronaldo didn't dive.He jumped to avoid the GK and caught his feet on the goalkeeper's hands.I'll admit that he could have(and should have) stayed up,but that doesn't change the fact that he was tripped.
You say that every contact isn't a foul.The what do you have to say about Steven Gerrard's countless "dives"(by your definition)?Is it Ok for him to dive because you have a soft spot for his club?Its PATHETIC the way people are always waiting for a chance to pick on Ronaldo.
I hate to see diving from any team(including my team).I also hate hypocrites who criticize others while turning a blind eye to cheaters from their own teams.
ginkgo
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